I’ve been reading through the manuscript and there are some concerns I have. So in order to get some feedback, I have posted a draft of Part 1 here:
I’d be interested to hear what others have to say so please give any comments you have. You can post comments on this post or just shoot me an email. Some things that I am mulling over are:
I like to provide minimal setting, but is there enough?
Are the characters engaging enough? Does the reader care about them (even if they are not “nice”)?
Does the plot move to fast? Too slow in places?
Is the narrator’s voice appropriate? Engaging?
Do you want to know what comes next?